Questions about example sentences with, and the definition and usage of "Ulsan"

A: I scheduled, not i’m scheduled. California. well done, you just need a little bit of improvement. Your intonation/tone needs some more emotion but your are doing great 👍

A: I went to Ulsan for my close sister's wedding on the weekend. Due to the coronavirus, more than 50 people were not allowed to enter the wedding hall, so unfortunately, I couldn't attend the wedding.
So I watched their appearance on a small monitor in the lobby of the wedding hall.
After the wedding, I went to a cafe near the sea.
The weather was very nice, and I drank beer listening to the sound of the waves.
I felt very good.

A: I completely understood your paragraph and it’s quite good but you have some grammar mistakes. For the second sentence, you said that “I have been working with mother's business for four years” however, you have to state who’s mother it is. You would instead say “I have been working with my mothers business for four years” I also believe your mothers business is a Thai massage salon so you would refer to it as “my salon is in ilsan dong” You would also say “it’s a Thai massage salon” The rest of the sentences are correct until “I will try to read books of various genres as possible “ You would say “I try to read books of various genres as much as I can”