- Spanish (Mexico)
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今日、私は会社に行って、朝ごはんを食べて、市場で竹の子を買って、下町から家まで車で行きます。 Does this sound natural?
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It's grammatically ok as far as I can tell. But try using more words like, そして、それで、最後に、それから. It breaks up your paragraph and makes it easier to understand/order.
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- English (UK)
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It's grammatically ok as far as I can tell. But try using more words like, そして、それで、最後に、それから. It breaks up your paragraph and makes it easier to understand/order.
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- Spanish (Mexico)
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今日、私は会社に行く前に朝ごはんを食べて、それから市場で筍（たけのこ）を買っていて、そして後で下町から家まで車で行きます。
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- Spanish (Mexico)
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