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10 Sep 2018
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My hobby is Snorkeling.
When I went to Saipan, i got into a sea and saw many colorful fishes.
I was impressed to transparent sea.
I want to go to there again.
Please correct me if it sounds strange.
My hobby is Snorkeling.
When I went to Saipan, i got into a sea and saw many colorful fishes.
I was impressed to transparent sea.
I want to go to there again.
Please correct me if it sounds strange.
When I went to Saipan, i got into a sea and saw many colorful fishes.
I was impressed to transparent sea.
I want to go to there again.
Please correct me if it sounds strange.
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It sounds good!
But change:
I got into a sea --> I swam in the sea
Colorful fishes --> Colourful fish
I want to go to there again --> I want to go there again
Transparent sea sounds a little unnatural. Transparent sea --> The beauty of the sea
Corrected:
My hobby is snorkelling. When I went to Saipan, I swam in the sea and saw many colorful fish. I was impressed by the beauty of the sea. I want to go there again.
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