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6 May 2015
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Please help me with these paragraphs.
Please proofread:
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If you have enjoyed reading the stories that I have posted on my blog and Facebook wall, I am pretty sure you will love my huge collection of stories, letters, poems, and essays. The title of this collection is ‘THE REFLECTIONS’. If you wish to read from this collection, you will need to purchase the book. The book is in original computer print form. It will cost you Rs.500 only. So if you like, I can send you the book. For that you will have to send an order SMS/Call at .............. Or email your order at ............ If you are out of Larkana, you can get the book by TCS and you will have to make the payment through EasyPaisa.
does this sound natural?
Whether you are an English learner or literature-lover, I bet you will love my book, THE REFLECTIONS. It comprises of stories, poems, letters, and essays. Those who have read the book, say that it has changed their thoughts and lives. You can purchase the book, and see how it can help you. To order the book, contact 03433846385 or RizwanAhmedMemon@gmail.com
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RizwanAhmedMemon.blogspot.com
Do you want to write a novel? Do you want to tell the world the stories you have in your mind? The best way to develop writing skills is to read more and more. My book entitled THE REFLECTIONS can give you a feel how to write stories, essays, poems, and letters. Please order your book by SMS/call at 03433846385 or by email at RizwanAhmedMemon@gmail.com
All Rights Reserved
RizwanAhmedMemon.blogspot.com
If you are learning English, and you feel you can’t express your ideas clearly; then you need to do reading. This way your vocabulary will increase, you will learn collocations and common English patterns. My book, THE REFLECTIONS is for you to solve your problems. To order, SMS/Call at 03433846385 or email at RizwanAhmedMemon@gmail.com
All Rights Reserved
RizwanAhmedMemon.blgospot.com
Feeling bored by reading boring text books? Are you sick of boring Guided English for Pakistan? You need a book which not only educate you but also entertain you. Here is your solution THE REFLECTIONS, a collection of stories, essays, poems, and letters. The book can be ordered all over Pakistan. To order, SMS/Call at 03433846385 or email at RizwanAhmedMemon@gmail.com
All Rights Reserved
RizwanAhmedMemon.blogspot.com
Read revolutionary, thought-provoking stories, essays, poems, and letters in my book, THE REFLECTIONS. Receive your book all over Pakistan by TCS, and make payment via EasyPaisa. To order, SMS/Call at 03433846385 or email at RizwanAhmedMemon@gmail.com
Please help me with these paragraphs.
Please proofread:
Your suggestions on the following texts:
If you have enjoyed reading the stories that I have posted on my blog and Facebook wall, I am pretty sure you will love my huge collection of stories, letters, poems, and essays. The title of this collection is ‘THE REFLECTIONS’. If you wish to read from this collection, you will need to purchase the book. The book is in original computer print form. It will cost you Rs.500 only. So if you like, I can send you the book. For that you will have to send an order SMS/Call at .............. Or email your order at ............ If you are out of Larkana, you can get the book by TCS and you will have to make the payment through EasyPaisa.
does this sound natural?
Whether you are an English learner or literature-lover, I bet you will love my book, THE REFLECTIONS. It comprises of stories, poems, letters, and essays. Those who have read the book, say that it has changed their thoughts and lives. You can purchase the book, and see how it can help you. To order the book, contact 03433846385 or RizwanAhmedMemon@gmail.com
All Rights Reserved
RizwanAhmedMemon.blogspot.com
Do you want to write a novel? Do you want to tell the world the stories you have in your mind? The best way to develop writing skills is to read more and more. My book entitled THE REFLECTIONS can give you a feel how to write stories, essays, poems, and letters. Please order your book by SMS/call at 03433846385 or by email at RizwanAhmedMemon@gmail.com
All Rights Reserved
RizwanAhmedMemon.blogspot.com
If you are learning English, and you feel you can’t express your ideas clearly; then you need to do reading. This way your vocabulary will increase, you will learn collocations and common English patterns. My book, THE REFLECTIONS is for you to solve your problems. To order, SMS/Call at 03433846385 or email at RizwanAhmedMemon@gmail.com
All Rights Reserved
RizwanAhmedMemon.blgospot.com
Feeling bored by reading boring text books? Are you sick of boring Guided English for Pakistan? You need a book which not only educate you but also entertain you. Here is your solution THE REFLECTIONS, a collection of stories, essays, poems, and letters. The book can be ordered all over Pakistan. To order, SMS/Call at 03433846385 or email at RizwanAhmedMemon@gmail.com
All Rights Reserved
RizwanAhmedMemon.blogspot.com
Read revolutionary, thought-provoking stories, essays, poems, and letters in my book, THE REFLECTIONS. Receive your book all over Pakistan by TCS, and make payment via EasyPaisa. To order, SMS/Call at 03433846385 or email at RizwanAhmedMemon@gmail.com
Please proofread:
Your suggestions on the following texts:
If you have enjoyed reading the stories that I have posted on my blog and Facebook wall, I am pretty sure you will love my huge collection of stories, letters, poems, and essays. The title of this collection is ‘THE REFLECTIONS’. If you wish to read from this collection, you will need to purchase the book. The book is in original computer print form. It will cost you Rs.500 only. So if you like, I can send you the book. For that you will have to send an order SMS/Call at .............. Or email your order at ............ If you are out of Larkana, you can get the book by TCS and you will have to make the payment through EasyPaisa.
does this sound natural?
Whether you are an English learner or literature-lover, I bet you will love my book, THE REFLECTIONS. It comprises of stories, poems, letters, and essays. Those who have read the book, say that it has changed their thoughts and lives. You can purchase the book, and see how it can help you. To order the book, contact 03433846385 or RizwanAhmedMemon@gmail.com
All Rights Reserved
RizwanAhmedMemon.blogspot.com
Do you want to write a novel? Do you want to tell the world the stories you have in your mind? The best way to develop writing skills is to read more and more. My book entitled THE REFLECTIONS can give you a feel how to write stories, essays, poems, and letters. Please order your book by SMS/call at 03433846385 or by email at RizwanAhmedMemon@gmail.com
All Rights Reserved
RizwanAhmedMemon.blogspot.com
If you are learning English, and you feel you can’t express your ideas clearly; then you need to do reading. This way your vocabulary will increase, you will learn collocations and common English patterns. My book, THE REFLECTIONS is for you to solve your problems. To order, SMS/Call at 03433846385 or email at RizwanAhmedMemon@gmail.com
All Rights Reserved
RizwanAhmedMemon.blgospot.com
Feeling bored by reading boring text books? Are you sick of boring Guided English for Pakistan? You need a book which not only educate you but also entertain you. Here is your solution THE REFLECTIONS, a collection of stories, essays, poems, and letters. The book can be ordered all over Pakistan. To order, SMS/Call at 03433846385 or email at RizwanAhmedMemon@gmail.com
All Rights Reserved
RizwanAhmedMemon.blogspot.com
Read revolutionary, thought-provoking stories, essays, poems, and letters in my book, THE REFLECTIONS. Receive your book all over Pakistan by TCS, and make payment via EasyPaisa. To order, SMS/Call at 03433846385 or email at RizwanAhmedMemon@gmail.com
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The only mistakes I found were the fact that you need a comma instead of a semicolon in this sentence: "If you are learning English, and you feel you can’t express your ideas clearly; then you... "
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"You need a book which not only educate you but also entertain you."
should instead be:
"You need a book which not only educates you, but also entertains you."
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Ok than you for replying.
What about the follwoing texts, DO THEY LOOK NICE?
Does this sound natural and accurate?
How to purchase this book.
Hi,
Dear reader,
If you have read this book, you must have loved it. I am pretty sure you would like to share it with your family and friends. May be you could give it to your loved ones as a gift. My huge collection of stories, letters, poems, and essays which is entitled ‘THE REFLECTIONS’ can help you change your lives, thoughts, and even your English. If you wish to purchase more copies of this book, you will need to order them. The book is in original computer print form. It will cost you Rs.500 only.
You can place your order by sending message on Facebook (Facebook.com/RizwanAhmedMemon), by sending an SMS / by calling at 03433846385, or by sending an email at RizwanAhmedMemon@gmail.com. If you are out of Larkana, for that you will have to receive the book by TCS and you will have to make the payment through EasyPaisa. Please send me your postal address and other information if you want to buy the book.
Regards,
http://rizwanahmedmemon.blogspot.com/
Also this one:
Hi,
Dear reader,
If you have enjoyed reading the stories that I have posted on my blog and Facebook wall, I am pretty sure you will love my huge collection of stories, letters, poems, and essays. The title of this collection is ‘THE REFLECTIONS’. If you wish to read more from this collection, you will need to purchase the book. The book is in original computer print form. It will cost you Rs.500 only. So if you like, I can send you the book.
A note for all my friends: Friends, I would have gifted you the book, but it costs since it is not printed by any publisher yet. I am getting it printed on my own from printing shops.
You can place your order by sending message on Facebook (Facebook.com/RizwanAhmedMemon), by sending an SMS / by calling at 03433846385, or by sending an email at RizwanAhmedMemon@gmail.com. If you are out of Larkana, for that you will have to receive the book by TCS and you will have to make the payment through EasyPaisa. Please send me your postal address and other information if you want to buy the book.
Regards,
http://rizwanahmedmemon.blogspot.com/
What about the follwoing texts, DO THEY LOOK NICE?
Does this sound natural and accurate?
How to purchase this book.
Hi,
Dear reader,
If you have read this book, you must have loved it. I am pretty sure you would like to share it with your family and friends. May be you could give it to your loved ones as a gift. My huge collection of stories, letters, poems, and essays which is entitled ‘THE REFLECTIONS’ can help you change your lives, thoughts, and even your English. If you wish to purchase more copies of this book, you will need to order them. The book is in original computer print form. It will cost you Rs.500 only.
You can place your order by sending message on Facebook (Facebook.com/RizwanAhmedMemon), by sending an SMS / by calling at 03433846385, or by sending an email at RizwanAhmedMemon@gmail.com. If you are out of Larkana, for that you will have to receive the book by TCS and you will have to make the payment through EasyPaisa. Please send me your postal address and other information if you want to buy the book.
Regards,
http://rizwanahmedmemon.blogspot.com/
Also this one:
Hi,
Dear reader,
If you have enjoyed reading the stories that I have posted on my blog and Facebook wall, I am pretty sure you will love my huge collection of stories, letters, poems, and essays. The title of this collection is ‘THE REFLECTIONS’. If you wish to read more from this collection, you will need to purchase the book. The book is in original computer print form. It will cost you Rs.500 only. So if you like, I can send you the book.
A note for all my friends: Friends, I would have gifted you the book, but it costs since it is not printed by any publisher yet. I am getting it printed on my own from printing shops.
You can place your order by sending message on Facebook (Facebook.com/RizwanAhmedMemon), by sending an SMS / by calling at 03433846385, or by sending an email at RizwanAhmedMemon@gmail.com. If you are out of Larkana, for that you will have to receive the book by TCS and you will have to make the payment through EasyPaisa. Please send me your postal address and other information if you want to buy the book.
Regards,
http://rizwanahmedmemon.blogspot.com/
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