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Could anyone help me correcting the following sentences?
Though conclusion of the Cold War had a great impact on the international relationships as well as the politics and the economy of Japan, it is pointed out that new international order that can replace the Cold War has not made its appearance yet. The global society, however, seems it has gradually formed its images as a beginning of new era. Through various experiences, it is often said that the world of post war years is not transparent and more dynamic. Thus, it is even more significant to draw our diplomatic policies based on current movements and characteristics grasped precisely, which are gradually emerging among the global society.
Could anyone help me correcting the following sentences?
Though conclusion of the Cold War had a great impact on the international relationships as well as the politics and the economy of Japan, it is pointed out that new international order that can replace the Cold War has not made its appearance yet. The global society, however, seems it has gradually formed its images as a beginning of new era. Through various experiences, it is often said that the world of post war years is not transparent and more dynamic. Thus, it is even more significant to draw our diplomatic policies based on current movements and characteristics grasped precisely, which are gradually emerging among the global society.
Though conclusion of the Cold War had a great impact on the international relationships as well as the politics and the economy of Japan, it is pointed out that new international order that can replace the Cold War has not made its appearance yet. The global society, however, seems it has gradually formed its images as a beginning of new era. Through various experiences, it is often said that the world of post war years is not transparent and more dynamic. Thus, it is even more significant to draw our diplomatic policies based on current movements and characteristics grasped precisely, which are gradually emerging among the global society.
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@miyukikz Though the conclusion of the Cold War had a great impact on international relationships as well as the politics and economy of Japan, it has been pointed out that a new international order that can replace the Cold War has not made its appearance yet. The global society, however, seems to have gradually formed an image of the beginning of new era. Through various experiences, it is often said that the world of post war years has not become transparent or more dynamic. Thus, it is even more important to draw up our diplomatic policies based on a full understanding of current movements and characteristics, which are gradually emerging among the global society.
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@miyukikz Though the conclusion of the Cold War had a great impact on international relationships as well as the politics and economy of Japan, it has been pointed out that a new international order that can replace the Cold War has not made its appearance yet. The global society, however, seems to have gradually formed an image of the beginning of new era. Through various experiences, it is often said that the world of post war years has not become transparent or more dynamic. Thus, it is even more important to draw up our diplomatic policies based on a full understanding of current movements and characteristics, which are gradually emerging among the global society.
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