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About a recommended hiking path: I would like you to change this to more natural English please.
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When you are climbing up to the peak from this side of the mountain, I recommend you take long time to have breaks as many as possible and often try to see the panoramic views, because this part of the trail is the most wonderful and highly recommended.
Actually the other side of the peak is not so impressive scenery to see the lake from the mountain.
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When you are climbing up to the peak from this side of the mountain, I recommend you take long time to have breaks as many as possible and often try to see the panoramic views, because this part of the trail is the most wonderful and highly recommended.
Actually the other side of the peak is not so impressive scenery to see the lake from the mountain.
Does this sound natural?
- English (US)
A little unnatural
When you are climbing up to the peak from this side of the mountain, I recommend you take your time and take as many breaks as possible in order to see the scenic views. This part of the trail is the most beautiful and very much recommended. The hike from the alternate side of the peak is not as impressive and doesn't afford a view of the lake from the mountain.
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- English (US)
A little unnatural
When you are climbing up to the peak from this side of the mountain, I recommend you take your time and take as many breaks as possible in order to see the scenic views. This part of the trail is the most beautiful and very much recommended. The hike from the alternate side of the peak is not as impressive and doesn't afford a view of the lake from the mountain.
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Nice to meet you, cwmillerlds.
You understand what I wanted to say.
The corrected sentences are so nice. I will use them when I tell about it to international tourists.
Thanks a lot!
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