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On the ethical grounds, pedophiles must not be permitted for any reason. But some Japanese guys say that we have a right to enjoy child pornography. I think it's obviously doubt and a sin against humanity. That's the reason why I can't regard Japan as a civilized society. Does this sound natural?
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On the ethical grounds, pedophiles must not be permitted for any reason. But some Japanese gays say that we have a right to enjoy child pornography. I think it's obviously a sin against humanity. That is why I can't regard Japan as a civilized society.
Also saying“gays” a lot of people could get offended
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On the ethical grounds, pedophiles must not be permitted for any reason. But some Japanese gays say that we have a right to enjoy child pornography. I think it's obviously a sin against humanity. That is why I can't regard Japan as a civilized society.
Also saying“gays” a lot of people could get offended
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A little unnatural
Hi 👋 @tamakids
It’s very good,.
This is more natural sounding:
For ethical reasons pedophiles must not be permitted for any reason but some Japanese men say they should have a right to enjoy child pornography.
I believe it's an abhorrent crime against humanity and it’s the reason why I can't regard Japan as a civilized society!
I absolutely agree with you @tamakids
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