11 Nov 2018

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I would like you to correct this to more natural English please.
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This ice cream is packed with a balloon.

When you cut off the nipples of the balloon it automatically comes out even if you do not squeezing it.

This is why, once you start eating it you can't have a break until the ice cream is finished.
does this sound natural?

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