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i want to ask about using “reconciliation”
My best moment of high school age was a reconciliation with one of best friends. In those days, we belonged to same basketball club, but oneday we had made a quarrel over the rule of the club.
However, thanks to the last game, we made many eye contacts or conversations about the strategies during the game. After we won the game, we could shake our hands and hugged each other. Does this sound natural?
My best moment of high school age was a reconciliation with one of best friends. In those days, we belonged to same basketball club, but oneday we had made a quarrel over the rule of the club.
However, thanks to the last game, we made many eye contacts or conversations about the strategies during the game. After we won the game, we could shake our hands and hugged each other. Does this sound natural?
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A little unnatural
Just a couple of things.
My best moment of high school was a reconciliation (or reconciling with) with one of MY best friends. In those days, we belonged to THE same basketball club, but one day we had QUARRELED OVER A CLUB RULE.
However, thanks to the last game, we made eye contact or conversed about strategy many times during the game. After we won the game, we could shake our hands and hug each other.
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- English (US)
A little unnatural
Just a couple of things.
My best moment of high school was a reconciliation (or reconciling with) with one of MY best friends. In those days, we belonged to THE same basketball club, but one day we had QUARRELED OVER A CLUB RULE.
However, thanks to the last game, we made eye contact or conversed about strategy many times during the game. After we won the game, we could shake our hands and hug each other.
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My best moment in high school was a reconciliation with one of my best friends. In those days, we belonged to same basketball club. One day we had a quarrel over the rules of the club.
However, thanks to the last game, we made eye contact and conversation about the strategies. After we won the game, we could shake hands and hugged each other.
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