I admit I'm kinda beat because we traveled a lot. 移動が多くて、なかなかの疲労。 As a photo caption. does this sound natural?

6 Nov 2014

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English (US)

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If you're putting it on social media (ex: Facebook, etc.) then it's fine if you upload it right away and add the caption. But if it happened a while ago you should change it to the past tense. "I admit I was kinda beat because we travelled a lot."

trinrin

6 Nov 2014

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If you're putting it on social media (ex: Facebook, etc.) then it's fine if you upload it right away and add the caption. But if it happened a while ago you should change it to the past tense. "I admit I was kinda beat because we travelled a lot."

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quolia444

6 Nov 2014

Japanese

@trinrin いつもありがとう。そういう細かい指摘大歓迎です。勉強になりました。Thank you very much for your meticulous corrections! I've learned a lot.

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trinrin

6 Nov 2014

English (US)

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No problem! I'm glad I can help! (^^)

joshwhetstone

6 Nov 2014

English (US)

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If it were more formal writing, you might say “...kind of beaten down...”

Also, “traveled” is the correct spelling in American English. Other verbs ending in an L follow the same convention, e.g. cancel, canceled, canceling. This is one of many subtle differences between British and American English. Other differences are more pronounced.

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I admit I'm kinda beat because we traveled a lot.移動が多くて、なかなかの疲労。As a photo caption. does this sound natural?

I admit I'm kinda beat because we traveled a lot.
移動が多くて、なかなかの疲労。

As a photo caption. does this sound natural?