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Please can you correct my sentences, tell me which words sound weird or copy-correct-paste my text? It is for a part of a presentation in cinema. Thanks! ;)

This sequence of the movie increases the complexity between the loving rivalries
All these rivalries are preparing conflicts of whom the princess is the center. After this scene, Montpensier sees Anjou and Guise coming ( as Guise had seen Montpensier and Chabannes arrive at the beginning of the movie, when they were at the Mézières (<-- it's a family name))
The cinema has for a goal to show with images what we already knew since a few minutes.
After this sequence, the movie comes back to the short-story with the husband's jalousy crisis.

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