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八木山動物園駅にコンビニが二つある、一つは田舎っぽくてあんまり人がない……だけど、安い野菜も売ってる！おばあちゃんはどうもどうもって何度も言った…… Does this sound natural?
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A little unnatural
Quite good:) but maybe...
八木山動物園駅にはコンビニが二つあって、その一つは田舎っぽくてあんまり人がいなかった...だけど安い野菜も売ってた！
おばあちゃんはどうもどうもって何度も言った。is better.
If you want to talk about past, you might as well use past tense for all verbs.
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- Japanese
Natural
「…あんまり人がいない」
「…って何度も言ってた」
でもいいかもです！
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- Japanese
A little unnatural
Quite good:) but maybe...
八木山動物園駅にはコンビニが二つあって、その一つは田舎っぽくてあんまり人がいなかった...だけど安い野菜も売ってた！
おばあちゃんはどうもどうもって何度も言った。is better.
If you want to talk about past, you might as well use past tense for all verbs.
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