When mom and me walked together, suddenly there was a winter cold wind blowing. So we got closer and felt warm from the body each other. Does this sound natural?
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A little unnatural
"When mom and I walked together, there was suddenly an ice cold winter wind. We got closer to get warm with our combined body heat." I hope you don't mind that I revised your story to sound more natural. I hope this helps!
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- English (US)
A little unnatural
"When mom and I walked together, there was suddenly an ice cold winter wind. We got closer to get warm with our combined body heat." I hope you don't mind that I revised your story to sound more natural. I hope this helps!
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