11 Dec 2018

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I wrote some lyrics, could you please correct it?

I hope white snow would be sticking on the ground tomorrow.
Then I will treat you a cup of warm tea.
There's nothing else except to keep standing by me.
(I wanted to tell "All you have to do is just keep staying with me." But I'm not sure I wrote properly)
Please promise me.

Will it be snowing?
While we are getting asleep
Will it be snowing?
On your closed eyes
Will it be snowing?
When we open the curtain in the morning

Don't be hurry, I have stories that I didn't tell.
After falling asleep, today becomes yesterday.
All you have to do is just keep staying with me.
Please promise me.

Look, the outside is especially white.

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