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11 Dec 2018

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I wrote some lyrics, could you please correct it?

Your appearance and your heart are same.
You look to me smiling like a picture.
(I mean, you are smiling and looking to me. Is it accurate?)
You are like mom's hug that I can't remember.

What should I do?
How do I have to do?

Your appearance and your heart are different.
You look to me smiling again.
You looks different but still like a picture,
reminding me of forgotten my sad memories when I was a kid.

What should I do?
How do I have to do?

I touch you and feel flying
like petals scattered by a spring breeze.
Time stops and I feel weightlessness
in the world where this moment only exists.

Your gesture and eyes,
the whisper and tear.
I'm you while you're me.
Like this, love passes.

Ye, Yeah, Yeahhh

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