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13 Dec 2018
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English (UK)
Question about English (UK)
Please correct the following.
~There was a rat!~
It has been 10 days since I had been to the UK,
there was a rat in hotel where I was staying.
At that time, I was relaxing at the hotel, but I felt indication something.
As it was moving at a tremendous speed,
at first I did not understand something at all.
It was very scary.
I hate insect, so I was checking for insects in UK when I was in Japan.
At that time, I knew that there were many rats in UK.
I remembered that, I noticed that the moving thing was a rat.
I immediately told the employees of the hotel,
but they did not respond immediately and dealt with themselves.
I responded by myself.
I saw the mouse entering the closet,
so I made a way from the closet to the door side by side.
After a while, the mouse went out of the room according to the way.
It's been a while since I came to the UK for a while,
but this is the most scary experience.
Please correct the following.
~There was a rat!~
It has been 10 days since I had been to the UK,
there was a rat in hotel where I was staying.
At that time, I was relaxing at the hotel, but I felt indication something.
As it was moving at a tremendous speed,
at first I did not understand something at all.
It was very scary.
I hate insect, so I was checking for insects in UK when I was in Japan.
At that time, I knew that there were many rats in UK.
I remembered that, I noticed that the moving thing was a rat.
I immediately told the employees of the hotel,
but they did not respond immediately and dealt with themselves.
I responded by myself.
I saw the mouse entering the closet,
so I made a way from the closet to the door side by side.
After a while, the mouse went out of the room according to the way.
It's been a while since I came to the UK for a while,
but this is the most scary experience.
~There was a rat!~
It has been 10 days since I had been to the UK,
there was a rat in hotel where I was staying.
At that time, I was relaxing at the hotel, but I felt indication something.
As it was moving at a tremendous speed,
at first I did not understand something at all.
It was very scary.
I hate insect, so I was checking for insects in UK when I was in Japan.
At that time, I knew that there were many rats in UK.
I remembered that, I noticed that the moving thing was a rat.
I immediately told the employees of the hotel,
but they did not respond immediately and dealt with themselves.
I responded by myself.
I saw the mouse entering the closet,
so I made a way from the closet to the door side by side.
After a while, the mouse went out of the room according to the way.
It's been a while since I came to the UK for a while,
but this is the most scary experience.
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- English (UK)
~There was a rat!~
It has been 10 days since I was in the UK,
there was a rat in hotel where I was staying.
At that time, I was relaxing at the hotel, but I felt an indication of something.
As it was moving at a tremendous speed,
at first I did not understand it at all.
It was very scary.
I hate insects, so I was checking for insects in the UK when I was in Japan.
At that time, I knew that there were many rats in the UK.
I remembered that, I noticed that the moving thing was a rat.
I immediately told the employees of the hotel,
but they did not respond immediately and dealt with themselves.
I responded by myself.
I saw the mouse entering the closet,
so I made a way from the closet to the door side by side.
After a while, the mouse went out of the room since it was the only way.
It's been a while since I've been to the UK ,
but this was the most scary experience.

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