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20 Dec 2018
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The buying of so many American companies and so much real estate by the Japanese caused concern on Wall Street. Does this sound natural?
The buying of so many American companies and so much real estate by the Japanese caused concern on Wall Street. Does this sound natural?
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Unnatural
The buying of so many American companies and so much real estate by the Japanese caused concern on Wall Street.
The purchase of so many.... instead
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Thank you! Can you give me another advise?̊̈ How can I make that sentence less abstract?
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Unnatural
Use specific company name and dollar amount—maybe to be more detailed
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ㅎㅎThank you so much for your kindness!!
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