24 Dec 2018

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(...)My favorite factions were the Abnegation and the Dauntless ones. But then, as the story went on, I understood that they’re quite excessive with their ways to behave and some people in them are too proud and rabid (I mean fanatic in a bad way) about their belonged-faction’s ideas.

Could you please correct these sentences about my impressions of a book (Divergent) to make it sound as natural as possible? Thank you! (I haven’t finished it yet, so don’t spoil it for me, please!)
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