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The story is, simply put, that Anne Shirley, a talkative 11-year-old ophan girl, gets adopted by siblings who live in a house called Green Gables.
Anne grows through thick and thin to enter the Queen Academy in order to become a teacher.
However, shortly after she graduates with the honer of winning the Avery Scholarship, Green Gables begins to suffer from misfortune. Does this sound natural?
The story is, simply put, that Anne Shirley, a talkative 11-year-old ophan girl, gets adopted by siblings who live in a house called Green Gables.
Anne grows through thick and thin to enter the Queen Academy in order to become a teacher.
However, shortly after she graduates with the honer of winning the Avery Scholarship, Green Gables begins to suffer from misfortune. Does this sound natural?
Anne grows through thick and thin to enter the Queen Academy in order to become a teacher.
However, shortly after she graduates with the honer of winning the Avery Scholarship, Green Gables begins to suffer from misfortune. Does this sound natural?
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A little unnatural
Overall, the story is about Anne Shirley, a talkative 11-year-old orphan girl, who is adopted by a pair of siblings that live in a house called Green Gables.
Anne goes through thick and thin to enter the Queen Academy in order to become a teacher.
However, shortly after she graduates with the honor of winning the Avery Scholarship, Green Gables begins to suffer from misfortune.
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A little unnatural
It's understandable, but there are some parts that seem a little off.
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A little unnatural
The story is, simply put, that Anne Shirley, a talkative 11-year-old ophan girl, gets adopted by siblings who live in a house called Green Gables.
Anne grows up through thick and thin to enter the Queens Academy, in order to become a teacher.
However, shortly after she graduates with the honors (honours, British/Canadian spelling) winning the Avery Scholarship, Green Gables begins to suffer from misfortune.
I'm not positive it's queens academy and not queen academy as you have written. It's been a long time since I read these books.
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