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Our company held seminar today.
So I left my office after lunch to participate this seminar.
It took 10 minutes on foot and walked along pond.
I saw some birds looks like duck which has bluck and white wings on the pond, I haven’t ever seen.
Today was the coldest day in this winter, I was reluctant to go there at first.
but after all I was fun.
After joining the seminar, I went to eat sushi with my colleague.
今日は会社のセミナーがあったので、昼過ぎにオフィスを出て会場に向かいました。
会場までは10分ほど、池に沿って歩きました。
池には見たことのない、白と黒の羽のカモのような鳥がいました。
とても寒く、会場まで歩くのは初めは嫌でしたが、なんだかんだ楽しかったです。
セミナーの後は同僚と寿司を食べに日本橋へ行きました。
Does this sound natural?
Our company held seminar today.
So I left my office after lunch to participate this seminar.
It took 10 minutes on foot and walked along pond.
I saw some birds looks like duck which has bluck and white wings on the pond, I haven’t ever seen.
Today was the coldest day in this winter, I was reluctant to go there at first.
but after all I was fun.
After joining the seminar, I went to eat sushi with my colleague.
今日は会社のセミナーがあったので、昼過ぎにオフィスを出て会場に向かいました。
会場までは10分ほど、池に沿って歩きました。
池には見たことのない、白と黒の羽のカモのような鳥がいました。
とても寒く、会場まで歩くのは初めは嫌でしたが、なんだかんだ楽しかったです。
セミナーの後は同僚と寿司を食べに日本橋へ行きました。
Does this sound natural?
So I left my office after lunch to participate this seminar.
It took 10 minutes on foot and walked along pond.
I saw some birds looks like duck which has bluck and white wings on the pond, I haven’t ever seen.
Today was the coldest day in this winter, I was reluctant to go there at first.
but after all I was fun.
After joining the seminar, I went to eat sushi with my colleague.
今日は会社のセミナーがあったので、昼過ぎにオフィスを出て会場に向かいました。
会場までは10分ほど、池に沿って歩きました。
池には見たことのない、白と黒の羽のカモのような鳥がいました。
とても寒く、会場まで歩くのは初めは嫌でしたが、なんだかんだ楽しかったです。
セミナーの後は同僚と寿司を食べに日本橋へ行きました。
Does this sound natural?
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10 Jan 2019
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A little unnatural
Our company held a seminar today,
so I left my office after lunch to participate.
It took 10 minutes to get there on foot. On my way there, I walked along a pond.
I saw some birds that looked like ducks. They had black and white wings I've never seen before.
Today was the coldest day all winter. I was reluctant to go there at first,
but I had fun.
After joining the seminar, I went to eat sushi with my colleague.
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