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(Wake #3 : the sequel to my previous post)
The story of this kind of awakening and evolution seems possible to me except that I'm not sure why, not a computer, but lost packets generated by the China's Great Firewall could awake its own awareness.
Other than science-fiction stuff, the process of Caitlin gaining her eyesight (first her special Websight, later her natural human eyesight) is both intriguing and moving.
I glimpsed the Wikipedia page for the next book of this WWW trilogy, and found that after this, US National Security Agency also notices the existence of Webmind and thinks it as the threat to the Nation. Does this sound natural?
The story of this kind of awakening and evolution seems possible to me except that I'm not sure why, not a computer, but lost packets generated by the China's Great Firewall could awake its own awareness.
Other than science-fiction stuff, the process of Caitlin gaining her eyesight (first her special Websight, later her natural human eyesight) is both intriguing and moving.
I glimpsed the Wikipedia page for the next book of this WWW trilogy, and found that after this, US National Security Agency also notices the existence of Webmind and thinks it as the threat to the Nation. Does this sound natural?
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The story of this kind of awakening and evolution seems possible to me except that I'm not sure why, not a computer, but lost packets generated by China's Great Firewall could evolve its own awareness.
Other than science-fiction stuff, the process of Caitlin gaining her eyesight (first her special Websight, later her natural human eyesight) is both intriguing and moving.
I read the Wikipedia page for the next book of this WWW trilogy, and found that after this, US National Security Agency also notices the existence of Webmind and thinks it is a threat to the Nation.
I made only minor changes.
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The story of this kind of awakening and evolution seems possible to me except that I'm not sure why, not a computer, but lost packets generated by China's Great Firewall could evolve its own awareness.
Other than science-fiction stuff, the process of Caitlin gaining her eyesight (first her special Websight, later her natural human eyesight) is both intriguing and moving.
I read the Wikipedia page for the next book of this WWW trilogy, and found that after this, US National Security Agency also notices the existence of Webmind and thinks it is a threat to the Nation.
I made only minor changes.
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