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13 Mar 2014
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Thank you sooo much for the kind birthday wishes. You all made a very happy birthday for me. First, I really want to appreciate my parents that brought me up and support me this 20 years. And my friends are also important for me, without them maybe I cannot enjoy these days. Anyway, I want say is really thank you and love you all!!<3
In these sentences, are there any wrong grammar? If yes, could you correct that? Thank you!!
Thank you sooo much for the kind birthday wishes. You all made a very happy birthday for me. First, I really want to appreciate my parents that brought me up and support me this 20 years. And my friends are also important for me, without them maybe I cannot enjoy these days. Anyway, I want say is really thank you and love you all!!<3
In these sentences, are there any wrong grammar? If yes, could you correct that? Thank you!!
In these sentences, are there any wrong grammar? If yes, could you correct that? Thank you!!
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Parallel structure error in the 3rd sentence.
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My friends are also important to me; without them my life might not be as enjoyable.
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For stuff like this, you should actually use the www.lang-8.com website instead. It's a sister website to this one. There it'll be easier to correct :)
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