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27 Jan 2019
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Hi, my name is takashi sato, please call me taka.
I was born and raised in Japan.
I work for telecommunication company which is the biggest one in the industry in Japan, as a person who accelerate the rate of innovation.
To be specific, I support to connect and cooperate with startups and corporations such as our corporation in order to transform bold ideas into tangible and innovative solutions.
Does this sound natural?
Hi, my name is takashi sato, please call me taka.
I was born and raised in Japan.
I work for telecommunication company which is the biggest one in the industry in Japan, as a person who accelerate the rate of innovation.
To be specific, I support to connect and cooperate with startups and corporations such as our corporation in order to transform bold ideas into tangible and innovative solutions.
Does this sound natural?
I was born and raised in Japan.
I work for telecommunication company which is the biggest one in the industry in Japan, as a person who accelerate the rate of innovation.
To be specific, I support to connect and cooperate with startups and corporations such as our corporation in order to transform bold ideas into tangible and innovative solutions.
Does this sound natural?
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28 Jan 2019
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- English (US)
A little unnatural
@dehi Both of those sentences make sense.
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- English (US)
A little unnatural
Hi, my name is Takashi Sato, please call me Taka.
I was born and raised in Japan.
I work for a telecommunication company, the biggest one in the Japanese industry, as a person who accelerates the rate of innovation.
To be specific, I connect and cooperate with startups and corporations such as ours in order to transform bold ideas into tangible and innovative solutions.
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A little unnatural
Hi, my name is takashi sato, please call me taka.
I was born and raised in Japan.
I work for a telecommunication company, which is the biggest one in the industry in Japan, as a person who accelerates the rate of innovation.
To be specific, I support to connect and cooperate with startups and corporations such as our corporation in order to transform bold ideas into tangible and innovative solutions.
I’m not sure what you mean by “support to connect”, it doesn’t make much sense to me. Maybe you mean to say something like “I strive to connect and cooperate”?
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@doctorterry500 Thank you for your prompt response and revise the sentences. It helped me a lot!
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@pblake03 Thank you for your quick response. I'd like to say two sentences below. What should I express?
1. I support startups and corporations.
2. I connect and cooperate with startups and corporations.
1. I support startups and corporations.
2. I connect and cooperate with startups and corporations.
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