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The following sentences are body paragraph of my research-based essay. Please check them and if there are any errors and run-on sentence indicate them. Thank you in advance.

The first reason that LASIK is important is because it is a stress-free procedure for patients. According to Dr. Scott MacRae, a professor of the University of Rochester, the actual procedure normally takes less than 10 minutes for each eye. Depending on a prescription, and the amount of correction needed, the laser itself only takes 20-50 seconds to correct vision. Therefore, the patients could have LASIK as outpatient surgery. Dr. Scott MacRae states that the actual treatment itself is painless; plenty of anesthetic drops will be applied to the eyes and numb them throughout the procedure. Thus, most patients experience very little pain. Shorten of operative duration and pain relief lead to alleviate distress of the patients.
does this sound natural?

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