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Suddenly my hand squeezed pretty hard. And I realized that I was not alone. My neighbor's boy was chatting loudly and circling around his mom and my mom, jumping and smiling. I looked up my mom’s face. I thought if I could touch her eyes, her lips, even her face, but she was far away from me. Even though she was walking next me holding my hand.

Could you make this writing more natural and correct grammars please? Thank you. You can change whole sentences or words, if you need it.
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