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Could you please correct this essay and give me some advice? Agree or disagree. Electronic voting should be promoted. Electronic voting can simply make people get more interested in politics and more people participate in an election, therefore I think electronic voting should be promoted following these three reasons. First, we can expect higher rate of voting by installing electronic voting system because it is convenient. Thanks to electronic voting, even people with disabilities can vote from their house. What’s more, in some countries, for example, voting is mandatory and if the voters don’t show up to the polling place they have to pay fine. However the number of people who pay fine will surly decline if electronic voting is accepted. Second, it costs high personal expenses to run polling places and count the voting. As elections are usually held by tax, we want to save the cost as low as possible. Not only saving personal expenses but also electronic voting makes elections more accurate since computers can total the votes. Third, electronic voting can encourage people to get more interested in election and politics. In Japan, for instance, voters can check out candidates names and faces thought out the town during the campaign, however not everyone knows what exactly candidates are trying to do when they are elected. Electronic voting can clear their policy and show it to the voters, then voters will be able to make the right decision. In order to make the country a better place, we should reflect everyone’s opinions when we make a decision. I’m sure that electronic voting can make it possible.

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