21 Mar 01:46 PM

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Please correct this sentences to be natural.
(Please tell me whether any changes are 'corrections' or 'suggestions')

"I think the reason why you've been suffering from rash is that you seemed to eat chips often. A lot of additives and sometimes oxidize oil have been used to them and they must have affected you. Maybe you should stop eating to see to detect if the health problem came from chips."

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