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HI guys!!! please help me to correction the text, thank you so much!

The story about the <The horse whisperer>

Grace is a 13 years old girl, she has a good friend is a horse, his name is pilgrim. They had a seriously hurt in a crash accident. Grace was lost one of her leg, the horse had almost lost his half face. Though, grace’s mum, Annie, she is a very successful woman work in the top fashionable magazine in New York. After the accident, she wants to get her daughter to get better. She also wants to save the horse life. In Annie’s mind, her daughter and the horse’s life are tie in together. She heard of the special skills that Tom Booker has with horses. At first, he said he can’t do anything about the horse because the horse had suffered too much. But Annie does not accept, so she drove with her daughter and the sick horse to the Tom booker’s house which is from New York to Montana.

After grace and her mum stay in Montana for a month, Grace’s father Robert, he is a lawyer, he was come to Montana to visit them for a week, but he didn’t find that Annie and Tom had fall in love already. One more half month later, the horse was better and it was time to leave Montana. But Grace accidently know the affair about her mum and Tom. She was angry and made the all horses were run away from the stable at that night. Tom was died by the horse’s kick when he try to getting all the horses back to stable at after morning.

Annie and Robert had separated when Annie got back to New York.

10 months later, Annie had a baby that she is not sure which man is the father between Tom and her husband Robert.
Does this sound natural?

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