- Italian
-
English (US)
-
English (UK)
If we split up the extract into more sentences the affect achieved is a suspenseful story. The used points create a pause between sentences and the writing flows with an anguished tone. Does this sound natural?
- English (US)
A little unnatural
I’m guessing you are explaining how the excerpt achieves a suspenseful mood.
I’m not sure if that’s what you are doing.
I tried cutting it down to this:
The deliberate use of short sentences in this excerpt helps create the feelings of suspense . Each pause between sentences interrupts the flow and adds to the anguished tone.
Was this answer helpful?
Obviously wrong
Explanation is not enough
Written in a language I can't understand
Answer is not related to the question
Other reason
- English (US)
A little unnatural
I’m guessing you are explaining how the excerpt achieves a suspenseful mood.
I’m not sure if that’s what you are doing.
I tried cutting it down to this:
The deliberate use of short sentences in this excerpt helps create the feelings of suspense . Each pause between sentences interrupts the flow and adds to the anguished tone.
Was this answer helpful?
- Italian
With HiNative, you can have your writing corrected by native speakers for free ✍️✨.
- "excess extract" How to pronounce these two words? For "excess", why do some dictionaries pronoun...
- The first extract argues about how little impact does official bulletins on crime have in public ...
- Both extracts show people's perceptions about official data on criminal activity handled by the g...
What’s this symbol?
The Language Level symbol shows a user's proficiency in the languages they're interested in. Setting your Language Level helps other users provide you with answers that aren't too complex or too simple.
-
Beginner
Has difficulty understanding even short answers in this language.
-
Beginner-Intermediate
Can ask simple questions and can understand simple answers.
-
Intermediate
Can ask all types of general questions and can understand longer answers.
-
Advanced
Can understand long, complex answers.
Show your appreciation in a way that likes and stamps can't.
By sending a gift to someone, they will be more likely to answer your questions again!
If you post a question after sending a gift to someone, your question will be displayed in a special section on that person’s feed.
Thank you very much! Your feedback is greatly appreciated.
