30 Mar 02:45 PM

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Title: retired Ichiro
In those days, Ichiro who is one of the most famous baseball player in Japan retired from baseball world. I was impressed that his last game was taken place in Japan where he born. I could watch the moment he went out the ground on TV, though I couldn’t go to there directly. I thought that it is normal for him to existence in baseball world. I can’t think that he is retired from baseball world.
Please correct this sentence and give your advice.
does this sound natural?

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