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I'm writing a Descriptive Narrative. Here is my first body paragraph. Please correct my mistakes. And I don't know how to use 5 senses. I need advice.

At the age of 9, Oprah was neglected while living with her mother and experienced first nightmarish sexual abuse by her 19-year-old cousin who was baby-sitting her. She continued to suffer being sexually assaulted by her cousin, a family friend, her mother’s boyfriend, and her uncle until she was 13 years old; she ran away from home. She became pregnant at 14 and had a baby prematurely. Unfortunately, her child died in the hospital shortly after birth.
does this sound natural?

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