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Seven years ago Lina was chosen from about 40,000 people (the audition's magnification was over 1000 times).
At that time, she was just a girl. However, having underwent many hardship and endured many plight, she became a genuine idol. Does this sound natural?
Seven years ago Lina was chosen from about 40,000 people (the audition's magnification was over 1000 times).
At that time, she was just a girl. However, having underwent many hardship and endured many plight, she became a genuine idol. Does this sound natural?
At that time, she was just a girl. However, having underwent many hardship and endured many plight, she became a genuine idol. Does this sound natural?
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A little unnatural
I’d say: “Seven years ago Lina was chosen from about 40,000 people (the audition's magnification was over 1000 times).
At that time, she was just a girl. However, having to undergo many hardships and enduring many plights, she became a genuine idol.”
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