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04 Apr 03:41 PM

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This is my diary for learning English.
Could you correct my English sentence?

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Today's diary is about my hobby.
I like playing the guitar and playing the video game.
I start the guitar at the age of 14 and I also continue it now.
I mainly play the rock.
I use the Fender Stratocaster, but I broke bridge pickup while playing the other day.
So I want send it for repair.
As far as video game, I love the fighting game Guilty Gear and I often play it.
I feel so frustrated when I can't win the game.
But one game is short and easy to play, so I tend to play.
I am interested in the recently released SEKIRO, so I want to play it sometime soon.
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