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5 Apr 2019
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What is the thing that you cherish the most?
What is the thing that you cherish the most? For me , I first think to my toy. This toy is my favorite friend .
It was my mother and me together to buy in the hypermarket when I was young .The toy was accompanied me has been for many years. Whether I have other toys , I always never forget it.
Finally , so many years have passed , I still cherish my favorite toy. Be consistent from beginning to end.Thank you for appearing in my life and keeping me company.
Does this sound natural?
What is the thing that you cherish the most?
What is the thing that you cherish the most? For me , I first think to my toy. This toy is my favorite friend .
It was my mother and me together to buy in the hypermarket when I was young .The toy was accompanied me has been for many years. Whether I have other toys , I always never forget it.
Finally , so many years have passed , I still cherish my favorite toy. Be consistent from beginning to end.Thank you for appearing in my life and keeping me company.
Does this sound natural?
What is the thing that you cherish the most? For me , I first think to my toy. This toy is my favorite friend .
It was my mother and me together to buy in the hypermarket when I was young .The toy was accompanied me has been for many years. Whether I have other toys , I always never forget it.
Finally , so many years have passed , I still cherish my favorite toy. Be consistent from beginning to end.Thank you for appearing in my life and keeping me company.
Does this sound natural?
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5 Apr 2019
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This one probably sounds better ^^
"What is the thing that you cherish the most?
For me, I think it is my toy. That toy is my favorite friend.
When I was little, me and my mother went to a hypermarket to buy it. The toy has been with me for years. Even though I had other toys, I never forgot it.
Finally, many years have passed, and I still cherish my favorite toy. Thank you for always being there for me and always keep me in company."
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This one probably sounds better ^^
"What is the thing that you cherish the most?
For me, I think it is my toy. That toy is my favorite friend.
When I was little, me and my mother went to a hypermarket to buy it. The toy has been with me for years. Even though I had other toys, I never forgot it.
Finally, many years have passed, and I still cherish my favorite toy. Thank you for always being there for me and always keep me in company."
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