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大通公園で色々な真っ白の雪像を見たり、アイススケートをしたり、お土産も買ったりすることができます。 Does this sound natural?
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A little unnatural
大通公園では、色々な真っ白の雪像を見たり、アイススケートをしたり、お土産を買ったりすることができます。
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It’s almost perfect, but there are three points you should correct. One is you need to put は after 大通公園で, and another is you should omit 真っ白の because it’s obvious that snow sculpture is white. The other is you should change も to を after お土産.
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If so, 色々な真っ白の雪像 sounds a bit uncomfortable. I think you should say 色々な形の真っ白な雪像.
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