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15 Apr 2019
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English (UK)
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Portuguese (Brazil)
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Portuguese (Portugal)
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Now I'm translating a finction fantasy comic which i'm drawing...
In this scene a prince of white rabbit kingdom(Hybrid human and rabbits),Sekine
is invited to teach hand to hand combat to his member. He is doing a job of major of army....
I would like you correct his part into posh(smart) english in which prince suppose to talk.
①Prince Sekine:
Watch,everyone.
In this case,
Being stabbed with a bayonet or spear like this situation,
And being delivered a blow with the foot...
According to our instruction so far,
You need escape from within the range of the opponent's attack.
That is to say...DODGE with backward-facing step.
②And keep your distance as long as possible from the opponent,
Using Gunfire,Bayonet,spear...
The edge of your foot when you are disarmed.
Stay fighting with long range...
This is the base of White Rabbits Combat.
③Keeping long range makes not only DODGEING enemy's attack
but also quicker RETREATING being ACCOMPLISHED...
This instruction is not wrong.
④However this might be FATAL
when you take multiple opponents in close combat...!!
⑤Let me show you everyone,
In order to...dodge this attack escaping backward...
⑥It would be possible to be delivered
Unexpected assault from behind.
⑦Just a pencil...very far from weapon
could SKEWER your brainstem.
⑧Skewering your brainstem is too sufficient to wipe you out,
Even you have sturdy and strong body...
⑨Let me say...
Even a jornalist can kill solidier
When you show your brainstem.
⑩However in this case...
Be killed...Physically,
Not socially.
Now I'm translating a finction fantasy comic which i'm drawing...
In this scene a prince of white rabbit kingdom(Hybrid human and rabbits),Sekine
is invited to teach hand to hand combat to his member. He is doing a job of major of army....
I would like you correct his part into posh(smart) english in which prince suppose to talk.
①Prince Sekine:
Watch,everyone.
In this case,
Being stabbed with a bayonet or spear like this situation,
And being delivered a blow with the foot...
According to our instruction so far,
You need escape from within the range of the opponent's attack.
That is to say...DODGE with backward-facing step.
②And keep your distance as long as possible from the opponent,
Using Gunfire,Bayonet,spear...
The edge of your foot when you are disarmed.
Stay fighting with long range...
This is the base of White Rabbits Combat.
③Keeping long range makes not only DODGEING enemy's attack
but also quicker RETREATING being ACCOMPLISHED...
This instruction is not wrong.
④However this might be FATAL
when you take multiple opponents in close combat...!!
⑤Let me show you everyone,
In order to...dodge this attack escaping backward...
⑥It would be possible to be delivered
Unexpected assault from behind.
⑦Just a pencil...very far from weapon
could SKEWER your brainstem.
⑧Skewering your brainstem is too sufficient to wipe you out,
Even you have sturdy and strong body...
⑨Let me say...
Even a jornalist can kill solidier
When you show your brainstem.
⑩However in this case...
Be killed...Physically,
Not socially.
In this scene a prince of white rabbit kingdom(Hybrid human and rabbits),Sekine
is invited to teach hand to hand combat to his member. He is doing a job of major of army....
I would like you correct his part into posh(smart) english in which prince suppose to talk.
①Prince Sekine:
Watch,everyone.
In this case,
Being stabbed with a bayonet or spear like this situation,
And being delivered a blow with the foot...
According to our instruction so far,
You need escape from within the range of the opponent's attack.
That is to say...DODGE with backward-facing step.
②And keep your distance as long as possible from the opponent,
Using Gunfire,Bayonet,spear...
The edge of your foot when you are disarmed.
Stay fighting with long range...
This is the base of White Rabbits Combat.
③Keeping long range makes not only DODGEING enemy's attack
but also quicker RETREATING being ACCOMPLISHED...
This instruction is not wrong.
④However this might be FATAL
when you take multiple opponents in close combat...!!
⑤Let me show you everyone,
In order to...dodge this attack escaping backward...
⑥It would be possible to be delivered
Unexpected assault from behind.
⑦Just a pencil...very far from weapon
could SKEWER your brainstem.
⑧Skewering your brainstem is too sufficient to wipe you out,
Even you have sturdy and strong body...
⑨Let me say...
Even a jornalist can kill solidier
When you show your brainstem.
⑩However in this case...
Be killed...Physically,
Not socially.
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Pay attention, everyone.
In this case,
when being attacked with a bayonet or a spear ... thusly....,
or being delivered a blow with the foot...
As I have taught you,
you need to retreat beyond the range of opponent's attack.
That is to say...DODGE/evade with a backward step.
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Pay attention, everyone.
In this case,
when being attacked with a bayonet or a spear ... thusly....,
or being delivered a blow with the foot...
As I have taught you,
you need to retreat beyond the range of opponent's attack.
That is to say...DODGE/evade with a backward step.
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②And maintain your distance from your opponent as long as possible ,
Using Gunfire, Bayonet, spear...
The edge of your foot when you are disarmed.
Continue fighting at long range...
This is the basis of White Rabbit Combat.
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④However this might be FATAL
when you face multiple opponents in close combat...!!
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⑤Let me demonstrate...
In order to...evade this attack by retreating...
⑥It would be possible to be
unexpectedly assailed from behind.
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⑨Let me say...
Even a journalist can kill soldier
if the soldier exposes his brainstem.
⑩Not sure what this means
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⑦Just a pencil...very far from a real weapon ,
could be thrust into your brainstem.
⑧Piercing of your brainstem is sufficient to destroy you,
even if you are sturdy and strong...
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@chibi-lang Thank you ⑩
Jornalist cannot kill solidier with hand to hand but can kill with just a pencil and force Solidier to quit his job(kill socially).
In this case just a pencil can actually kill solidier piercing of brainstem
Jornalist cannot kill solidier with hand to hand but can kill with just a pencil and force Solidier to quit his job(kill socially).
In this case just a pencil can actually kill solidier piercing of brainstem
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@Bourbonheim A journalist can't kill a soldier in hand to hand combat, but with the power of the pen he can force the soldier to retire from killing, and thus, the journalist has defeated the soldier socially. In this case, the words the pen writes are as effective as using the pen to pierce the soldier's brainstem.
I changed it to "pen" rather than "pencil" because we have an expression "The pen is mightier than the sword" which means, more or less, what you are saying.
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@chibi-lang ⑩ should be
The power of pen can defeat the Soldier not only socially but also in real combat in this case . Right?
The power of pen can defeat the Soldier not only socially but also in real combat in this case . Right?
- English (UK)
Pay attention (men)
or
Listen up (men)
If your opponent attacks with bayonet or spear, or even attempts to land a kick, you must move out of his reach by means of a backward step.
Stay out of his range whilst countering his attack with either gunfire, bayonet, spear or, if you are completely unarmed, use your feet.
This is the main principle of White Rabbit Combat.
If you like this, let me know and I’ll have a go at the remainder.
XA
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Sorry I can't help but these drawings look good! がんばってください!!
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