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The difficulties experienced by the writer after his decision to swim in a -1° C water are revealed by the use of the adjective "searing" to describe how painful hitting the ice was and the noun "cruelty", a powerful word, commonly used for acts which imply a strong physical pain, introduces what scared the writer most: "his shoulders-under moment", when his shoulders went under the water . Subsequently, his uncontrolled,involuntary and crazy movements make clear the reader how hazardous and unnatural is for human beings swimming in such a low temperature; in fact, this is not an activity for everyone. does this sound natural?

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