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21 May 2019
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Shirley, thank you!
It's not a long time we've been together,
In the meantime, I've been able to see how deep you have thoughts.
And I think I could have grown more mature in the process.
Shirley was my tutor, but on the other hand, I felt like Shirley is a family in the Philippines.
Things I experienced in the Philippines were new and difficult for me, but I think Shirley and John gave me strength so I could endure my Manila life.
Thank you so much so far, and I hope Shirley continues to be happy.
Then stay healthy and well until we meet next time! Does this sound natural?
Shirley, thank you!
It's not a long time we've been together,
In the meantime, I've been able to see how deep you have thoughts.
And I think I could have grown more mature in the process.
Shirley was my tutor, but on the other hand, I felt like Shirley is a family in the Philippines.
Things I experienced in the Philippines were new and difficult for me, but I think Shirley and John gave me strength so I could endure my Manila life.
Thank you so much so far, and I hope Shirley continues to be happy.
Then stay healthy and well until we meet next time! Does this sound natural?
It's not a long time we've been together,
In the meantime, I've been able to see how deep you have thoughts.
And I think I could have grown more mature in the process.
Shirley was my tutor, but on the other hand, I felt like Shirley is a family in the Philippines.
Things I experienced in the Philippines were new and difficult for me, but I think Shirley and John gave me strength so I could endure my Manila life.
Thank you so much so far, and I hope Shirley continues to be happy.
Then stay healthy and well until we meet next time! Does this sound natural?
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21 May 2019
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A little unnatural
Shirley, thank you!
It hasn't been a long time we've been together,
although, throught the time we have, I've been able to see how deep your thoughts are.
I feel like I've grown more mature in the process.
You were my tutor, but on the other hand, I felt like you were also family in the Philippines.
Things I experienced in the Philippines were new and difficult for me, but I think you and John gave me strength so I could endure my Manila life.
Thank you so much, and I hope you continue to be happy.
Please stay healthy and well until we meet next time!
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A little unnatural
Shirley, thank you!
It hasn't been a long time we've been together,
although, throught the time we have, I've been able to see how deep your thoughts are.
I feel like I've grown more mature in the process.
You were my tutor, but on the other hand, I felt like you were also family in the Philippines.
Things I experienced in the Philippines were new and difficult for me, but I think you and John gave me strength so I could endure my Manila life.
Thank you so much, and I hope you continue to be happy.
Please stay healthy and well until we meet next time!
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A little unnatural
Is this a letter to Shirley? if it is, there are a few more things that would have to be changed
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@BTS__ARMY_94 yeah right
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