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93. What use is art to society? * Enjoyment * Education * Decoration.

It is common knowledge that arts is interwined in most aspects of our lives.
First and foremost, I would like to mention enjoyment. Whereas some people find fascinating the idea of dedicating their lives to arts, others as myself that maybe do not have a prowess for arts, enjoy the different creations of artists. The main reason why we refuge in arts is because not only do we want to escape the drudgery, but we also want to unwind the strain of a tough week of work. Seldom do we see someone who is not keen on movies, or do not enjoy going to art exhibitions. Furthermore, we enjoy wearing designed clothes or watching architectural designs where artists have put a lot of hard work and creativity.
Another point worth mentioning is education. More often than not, we can learn from the different works of art. An example that pops into my head is the myriad of paintings which depict different moments of history. Only by acknowledging the era where these masterpieces were created, can we understand many aspects of the traditions and even values of these cultures. In addition. I do believe that at schools children should learn how to interpret the works of art.
In regard to decoration, it goes without saying that different generations have made use of art to decorate. For instance, the emperors allocate a great amount of money so as to artist could create magnificent masterpieces, such as sculptures, paintings, architectural designs, just to mention but a few. The reason why they do so, was because not only do they want to display how wealthy they were, but they also wanted to become timeless. Due to this investments we can know many criteria of our ancestors.
In conclusion, I would say that arts encompasses every field of humans beings.

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Hi guys, can you please help me to correct this text? Thank you
93. What use is art to society? * Enjoyment * Education * Decoration.

It is common knowledge that arts is interwined in most aspects of our lives.
First and foremost, I would like to mention enjoyment. Whereas some people find fascinating the idea of dedicating their lives to arts, others as myself that maybe do not have a prowess for arts, enjoy the different creations of artists. The main reason why we refuge in arts is because not only do we want to escape the drudgery, but we also want to unwind the strain of a tough week of work. Seldom do we see someone who is not keen on movies, or do not enjoy going to art exhibitions. Furthermore, we enjoy wearing designed clothes or watching architectural designs where artists have put a lot of hard work and creativity.
Another point worth mentioning is education. More often than not, we can learn from the different works of art. An example that pops into my head is the myriad of paintings which depict different moments of history. Only by acknowledging the era where these masterpieces were created, can we understand many aspects of the traditions and even values of these cultures. In addition. I do believe that at schools children should learn how to interpret the works of art.
In regard to decoration, it goes without saying that different generations have made use of art to decorate. For instance, the emperors allocate a great amount of money so as to artist could create magnificent masterpieces, such as sculptures, paintings, architectural designs, just to mention but a few. The reason why they do so, was because not only do they want to display how wealthy they were, but they also wanted to become timeless. Due to this investments we can know many criteria of our ancestors.
In conclusion, I would say that arts encompasses every field of humans beings.

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It is common knowledge that art is interwined in most aspects of our lives.
First and foremost, I would like to mention enjoyment. Whereas some people find the idea of dedicating their lives to arts fascinating, others, as myself (that may not have a prowess for art) enjoy the different creations of artists. A popular reason why we may refuge in art is not only the want to escape the drudgery, but also to unwind the strain of a tough week of work. Seldom do we see someone who is not keen on movies, or does not enjoy going to art exhibitions. Furthermore, we enjoy wearing designed clothes or seeing architectural designs where artists have put a lot of hard work and creativity.
Another point worth mentioning is education. More often than not, we can learn from the different works of art. An example that pops into my head is the myriad of paintings which depict different moments of history. Only by acknowledging the era where these masterpieces were created can we understand many aspects of the traditions and even values of these cultures. In addition,  I do believe that schools should teach children how to interpret works of art.
In regard to decoration, it goes without saying that different generations have made use of art to decorate. For instance, the emperors allocate a great amount of money so an artist could create masterpieces. Such as sculptures, paintings, architectural designs, just to mention a few. The reason why they do so was not only the want to display how wealthy they were, but they also wanted to become timeless. Due to these investments we can have knowledge of our ancestors.
In conclusion, I would say that art encompasses every field of human beings.

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