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This school route has no guardrail between the roadway and the sidewalk, and there is only the width that cars can barely pass each other, so children have to be careful not to hit cars inside the white line.
And sometimes there are telegraph poles on the narrow sidewalk, so children sometimes walk on the roadway over the white line to avoid them.
I would like to discrib how danger my daughter’s school route is . Can you imagine the situation in my description? Does this sound natural?
And sometimes there are telegraph poles on the narrow sidewalk, so children sometimes walk on the roadway over the white line to avoid them.
I would like to discrib how danger my daughter’s school route is . Can you imagine the situation in my description? Does this sound natural?
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A little unnatural
Pretty good. Completely understandable. I just made a few small changes.
This school route has no guardrail between the road and the sidewalk, and there is only the width that cars can barely pass each other, so children have to be careful not to hit cars inside the white line.
And there are some telephone poles on the narrow sidewalk, so children sometimes walk on the road over the white line to avoid them.
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A little unnatural
Pretty good. Completely understandable. I just made a few small changes.
This school route has no guardrail between the road and the sidewalk, and there is only the width that cars can barely pass each other, so children have to be careful not to hit cars inside the white line.
And there are some telephone poles on the narrow sidewalk, so children sometimes walk on the road over the white line to avoid them.
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