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English (US)
I love my little monsters.
I have two daughters.
I think they are little monsters.
They always make a mess in their room.
It's like monsters that destroys the city.
They are cry loudly.
It's like a screaming monsters.
They jump everywhere.
It's make a footsteps like Godzilla!
I'm so worn out.
I go to the bedroom where there are monsters to sleep.
However, it was the angels who were sleeping there!
They are so lovable and cute!
Those girls who will be transformed into monsters again tomorrow.
but, I love my little monsters! Does this sound natural?
I have two daughters.
I think they are little monsters.
They always make a mess in their room.
It's like monsters that destroys the city.
They are cry loudly.
It's like a screaming monsters.
They jump everywhere.
It's make a footsteps like Godzilla!
I'm so worn out.
I go to the bedroom where there are monsters to sleep.
However, it was the angels who were sleeping there!
They are so lovable and cute!
Those girls who will be transformed into monsters again tomorrow.
but, I love my little monsters! Does this sound natural?
- English (US)
Unnatural
It's like monsters that destroys the city. > They're like monsters that destroy the city.
They are cry loudly. > They always cry loudly.
It's like a screaming monsters. > They're like screaming monsters.
It's make a footsteps like Godzilla! > Their footsteps are like Godzilla!
I go to the bedroom where there are monsters to sleep. > I go to the bedroom where there are monsters sleeping.
However, it was the angels who were sleeping there! > However, there are angels sleeping there!
Those girls who will be transformed into monsters again tomorrow. >
Those girls will transform into monsters again tomorrow.
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- English (US)
Unnatural
It's like monsters that destroys the city. > They're like monsters that destroy the city.
They are cry loudly. > They always cry loudly.
It's like a screaming monsters. > They're like screaming monsters.
It's make a footsteps like Godzilla! > Their footsteps are like Godzilla!
I go to the bedroom where there are monsters to sleep. > I go to the bedroom where there are monsters sleeping.
However, it was the angels who were sleeping there! > However, there are angels sleeping there!
Those girls who will be transformed into monsters again tomorrow. >
Those girls will transform into monsters again tomorrow.
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