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English (US)
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Today is bonus pay day.
I feel happy and I’ looking forward to see a bonus statement.
This bonus pay will be pay for 2.25 months, and I can get much money once.
I think how I would use it.
I would like to travel to Florida and Hawaii.
When I travel abroad I feel fun and can experience something.
Also I’d like to have an expensive dinner at local restaurant and buy something, like BD of movies, comic books.
I’m so excited! Does this sound natural?
Today is bonus pay day.
I feel happy and I’ looking forward to see a bonus statement.
This bonus pay will be pay for 2.25 months, and I can get much money once.
I think how I would use it.
I would like to travel to Florida and Hawaii.
When I travel abroad I feel fun and can experience something.
Also I’d like to have an expensive dinner at local restaurant and buy something, like BD of movies, comic books.
I’m so excited! Does this sound natural?
- English (US)
Unnatural
Please check my sentence.( :
Today is bonus pay day.
I feel happy and I am looking forward to seeing my bonus statement.
The bonus will be pay for 2 and a half months. I will get much more money.
I have been thinking about how I will use it.
I would like to travel to Florida and Hawaii.
When I travel abroad I feel like having fun and experiencing new things.
Also I’d like to have an expensive dinner at local restaurant and buy something, like BD of movies, comic books.
I’m so excited!
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- English (US)
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I’m getting my work bonus today.
I feel happy and I’m looking forward to see a bonus statement.
This bonus will be the pay for about 2 months, and I can get so much money in one paycheck.
I’ve thought of how I would use it.
I would like to travel to Florida and Hawaii.
When I travel abroad, it is fun and I can always experience something new.
Also, I’d like to have an expensive dinner at a local restaurant, as well as buying a souvenir, like BD movies and comic books.
I’m so excited!
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- English (US)
Unnatural
Please check my sentence.( :
Today is bonus pay day.
I feel happy and I am looking forward to seeing my bonus statement.
The bonus will be pay for 2 and a half months. I will get much more money.
I have been thinking about how I will use it.
I would like to travel to Florida and Hawaii.
When I travel abroad I feel like having fun and experiencing new things.
Also I’d like to have an expensive dinner at local restaurant and buy something, like BD of movies, comic books.
I’m so excited!
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