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English (UK)
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Spanish (Spain)
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Turkish
The mice are scratching the plasterboard and I'm really worried that they might make it to make a hole and to enter the house which is an absolutely appaling scenerio. Does this sound natural?
- English (UK)
- Somali
A little unnatural
‘The mice are scratching the plasterboard and I'm really worried that they might make it to make a hole and to enter the house which is an absolutely appaling scenerio’
When you say ‘They might make it to make a hole and to enter the house’ it should instead be ‘They may dig a hole/ make a hole into the house’. Also scenario is spelt with an ‘a’ instead of an ‘e’. So the sentence will now be
‘The mice are scratching the plasterboard and I'm really worried that they may make a hole into the house which is an absolutely appaling scenario’
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