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6 Jul 2019
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私はグルテン、乳製品にアレルギーがあります。私も醤油にアレルギーがあります。大麦とライ麦と小麦粉と牛乳とチーズが食べられません。たまり醤油と豆乳と米粉とライスフードルが食べられます。そしてから、クロースコンタミネーション食べ物が私は病気になります。手袋を交換していただきありがとうございます。
(English: I have allergies to gluten and dairy products. I also have an allergy to soy sauce. I can not eat barley and rye, wheat flour, milk and cheese. I can eat tamari soy sauce, soya milk, rice flour and rice noodles. And from that, the contamination food will make me sick. Thank you for changing your gloves.) Does this sound natural?
私はグルテン、乳製品にアレルギーがあります。私も醤油にアレルギーがあります。大麦とライ麦と小麦粉と牛乳とチーズが食べられません。たまり醤油と豆乳と米粉とライスフードルが食べられます。そしてから、クロースコンタミネーション食べ物が私は病気になります。手袋を交換していただきありがとうございます。
(English: I have allergies to gluten and dairy products. I also have an allergy to soy sauce. I can not eat barley and rye, wheat flour, milk and cheese. I can eat tamari soy sauce, soya milk, rice flour and rice noodles. And from that, the contamination food will make me sick. Thank you for changing your gloves.) Does this sound natural?
(English: I have allergies to gluten and dairy products. I also have an allergy to soy sauce. I can not eat barley and rye, wheat flour, milk and cheese. I can eat tamari soy sauce, soya milk, rice flour and rice noodles. And from that, the contamination food will make me sick. Thank you for changing your gloves.) Does this sound natural?
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6 Jul 2019
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A little unnatural
私はグルテン、乳製品にアレルギーがあります。私は醤油にもアレルギーがあります。大麦とライ麦と小麦粉と牛乳とチーズが食べられません。たまり醤油と豆乳と米粉とライスヌードルは食べられます。食べられるものでもアレルギーの食べ物が微量でもついているとアレルギー発作を起こします。アレルギーのある食物を扱うときには手袋を交換していただけるとありがたいです。
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I also really want to emphasize that cross contamination (like wheat ramen water or wheat foods cooked on the same surface as other foods) will also make me sick.
I am going to Mitsuwa this weekend and wanted to make sure that they understand I get sick from gluten foods and cross contaminated cooking surfaces.
Thank you for your help!
ありがとうございます😊
I am going to Mitsuwa this weekend and wanted to make sure that they understand I get sick from gluten foods and cross contaminated cooking surfaces.
Thank you for your help!
ありがとうございます😊
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Any advice to make it sound more natural? Please and thank you 🙏🏼
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A little unnatural
私はグルテン、乳製品にアレルギーがあります。私は醤油にもアレルギーがあります。大麦とライ麦と小麦粉と牛乳とチーズが食べられません。たまり醤油と豆乳と米粉とライスヌードルは食べられます。食べられるものでもアレルギーの食べ物が微量でもついているとアレルギー発作を起こします。アレルギーのある食物を扱うときには手袋を交換していただけるとありがたいです。
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@tatsuca 本当ありがとうございます!!😊
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A little unnatural
「…私は醤油にもアレルギーがあります。大麦とライ麦と小麦粉と牛乳とチーズが食べられません。たまり醤油と豆乳と米粉とライスフードルは食べられます。それから、アレルギー物質を調理した調理器具などを使って調理した食べ物を食べても私は気分が悪くなります。亅
みたいな感じです!
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@Moohmin ありがとうございます!😊
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Unnatural
You should rewrite the second Japanese sentence; 私は醤油にもアレルギーがあります。
I know you write 「も」 so that you wanna insert the meaning of "also". However, if you write 「も」after subject ;「私」, it means the 「も」modify the subject. In this case, your sentence show a situation that A has allergies to soy source(醤油). Moreover, 私 has also allergies to one too. Therefore, you imply there are any person who has allergy besides 「私」, which is a little unfamiliar to Japanese people.
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@takid I see! Thank you!!
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