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08 Jul 08:51 AM
Japanese
Question about English (US)
I'm emailing you on behalf of Tanaka.
As for the product, we're going to launch it until July 20 to 21. And we got client's approval about that. The reason of our schedule are below. we have some tasks we need to work on.
■Task
-task A
-task B
We'll contact you if we can have that done earlier. does this sound natural?
As for the product, we're going to launch it until July 20 to 21. And we got client's approval about that. The reason of our schedule are below. we have some tasks we need to work on.
■Task
-task A
-task B
We'll contact you if we can have that done earlier. does this sound natural?
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08 Jul 09:27 AM
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English (US)
A little unnatural
I've made some edits to make your email more natural:
Hello [name],
I'm emailing you on behalf of Tanaka.
As for the product, we're planning to launch it from July 20 to 21 and we have already received the client's approval about the date. The details of our schedule are below and we have some tasks we need to work on.
■Task
- task A
- task B
We'll be sure contact you if we can finish the tasks any earlier.
*Note
I'm not sure about the date:
As for the product, we're going to launch it:
☓until July 20 to 21
○from July 20 to 21 (start July 20 end 21)
○on either July 20 to 21 (start 20 or 21)
○sometime before July 20 or 21(start any day before 20 or 21)
Hello [name],
I'm emailing you on behalf of Tanaka.
As for the product, we're planning to launch it from July 20 to 21 and we have already received the client's approval about the date. The details of our schedule are below and we have some tasks we need to work on.
■Task
- task A
- task B
We'll be sure contact you if we can finish the tasks any earlier.
*Note
I'm not sure about the date:
As for the product, we're going to launch it:
☓until July 20 to 21
○from July 20 to 21 (start July 20 end 21)
○on either July 20 to 21 (start 20 or 21)
○sometime before July 20 or 21(start any day before 20 or 21)
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English (US)
A little unnatural
I'm emailing you on behalf of Tanaka.
As for the product, we're going to launch it either July 20 to 21. We have the client's approval for it. The reasons for our schedules are below. We have some tasks to work on.
■Task
-task A
-task B
We'll contact you if we can have that done earlier.
As for the product, we're going to launch it either July 20 to 21. We have the client's approval for it. The reasons for our schedules are below. We have some tasks to work on.
■Task
-task A
-task B
We'll contact you if we can have that done earlier.
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English (US)
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Unnatural
I'm emailing you on behalf of Tanaka.
As for the product, we will not be launching until July 20th through the 21st. We have client's approval but are behind schedule and still have some tasks we need to complete.
■Task
-task A
-task B
We'll contact you if we can have these tasks done earlier.
As for the product, we will not be launching until July 20th through the 21st. We have client's approval but are behind schedule and still have some tasks we need to complete.
■Task
-task A
-task B
We'll contact you if we can have these tasks done earlier.
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English (US)
Spanish (Mexico)
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English (US)
A little unnatural
I've made some edits to make your email more natural:
Hello [name],
I'm emailing you on behalf of Tanaka.
As for the product, we're planning to launch it from July 20 to 21 and we have already received the client's approval about the date. The details of our schedule are below and we have some tasks we need to work on.
■Task
- task A
- task B
We'll be sure contact you if we can finish the tasks any earlier.
*Note
I'm not sure about the date:
As for the product, we're going to launch it:
☓until July 20 to 21
○from July 20 to 21 (start July 20 end 21)
○on either July 20 to 21 (start 20 or 21)
○sometime before July 20 or 21(start any day before 20 or 21)
Hello [name],
I'm emailing you on behalf of Tanaka.
As for the product, we're planning to launch it from July 20 to 21 and we have already received the client's approval about the date. The details of our schedule are below and we have some tasks we need to work on.
■Task
- task A
- task B
We'll be sure contact you if we can finish the tasks any earlier.
*Note
I'm not sure about the date:
As for the product, we're going to launch it:
☓until July 20 to 21
○from July 20 to 21 (start July 20 end 21)
○on either July 20 to 21 (start 20 or 21)
○sometime before July 20 or 21(start any day before 20 or 21)
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