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Dec.7.(Wed)
An alumunus came to my university for lecture today.He works for a company which I will work from next year.The name of the company is Hitachi,Ltd.I love this company because it has the environment that I can work all over the world.I want to send new way of life all over the world.
But to tell the truth,I don't want to work.
For a brief period to my graduation,I intend to play as hard as possible.
I think my sentences don't flow as smoothly and I made some mistakes.
please tell me appropriate expression.
Dec.7.(Wed)
An alumunus came to my university for lecture today.He works for a company which I will work from next year.The name of the company is Hitachi,Ltd.I love this company because it has the environment that I can work all over the world.I want to send new way of life all over the world.
But to tell the truth,I don't want to work.
For a brief period to my graduation,I intend to play as hard as possible.
I think my sentences don't flow as smoothly and I made some mistakes.
please tell me appropriate expression.
An alumunus came to my university for lecture today.He works for a company which I will work from next year.The name of the company is Hitachi,Ltd.I love this company because it has the environment that I can work all over the world.I want to send new way of life all over the world.
But to tell the truth,I don't want to work.
For a brief period to my graduation,I intend to play as hard as possible.
I think my sentences don't flow as smoothly and I made some mistakes.
please tell me appropriate expression.
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Just a suggestion:
"An alumnus came to my university for a lecture today. He works for the same company I'll be working for starting next year, Hitachi, Ltd. I love that company because it has an environment which allows me to work all over the world. I want to provide a new way of life to people across the globe.
But to tell you the truth, I don't really want to start working. I'm going to try and have as much fun as I can before I graduate."
Hopefully I got your meaning right :)
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@takuya111 I would write:
Dec 7th (Wed)
An alumunus came to my university for a lecture today.
He works for a company which I will work for from next year.
The name of the company is Hitachi, Ltd.
I love this company because it has business culture that allows it and its employees to work effectively all over the world.
I want to promote this ethos all around the world.
But to tell the truth, I don't want to work at the moment.
For the brief period up to my graduation I intend to spend my time in leisurely pursuits as much as possible.
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