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I wrote a poem today and I would appreciate any corrections.

"They say peace comes to people in different ways, although it's a universal feeling and understanding.

For me, it's when leaves rustle in the wind. When the wind cools the beads of sweat on my forehead ; when my worries show their insignificance ; when the birds chirp a little longer ; when the warmth of the sun is just right ; when I go to see the waves of the lands I've never been ; when I walk by wooden chimes and the nostalgia they bring.

But where are you in all of this...."

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