23 Jul 12:48 AM

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What do you think about this poem that I wrote?

From sunrise to sunset,
Why is it still too much to hold in?
The answer doesn't lie in the hills of Ireland nor in the Dead sea.
Let me sail,
Let me reach,
Let me run,
For I know the answer is wherever you are,
Am I too late?
Only you can say for time is strangling me,
But love's the only engine
Of survival,
There's a whisper in the morning breeze that sends shivers up my spine,
And I'll dance with you in the pool of my freshly cut tears....

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