17 Dec 2016

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Disabled is my first theme in this protfilo, I had been a volunteer in a disabled center before, I saw lots of patients losing their ability for taking care of themselves, they have trouble with managed their live, however, from their reacts to each others, I can feel there are friendly, kindness, inclusiveness between them, they keep curious to the things happened around them, remain the innocent heart like a child, that are the things as the physical normal people are gradually losing, we become the person who only cares about ourselves, become selfish, become numbness to this world, there are too many incentives in the modern man's live, we losing the sensitive senses to this world. Disable is not only on physical, but also on mental. Are we a disabled person?

please help me correct grammar and semantics which is not correct

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