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Could you check the following sentences?
I'd like to know if there is any grammer mistakes and wrong expression.

I sometimes cannot be honest with myself. How about you? It’s hard for me to say what I want to say. When I open my mouth, my words go twisted and I regret. But now, I have something I really want to say honestly. In Japanese, it’s hard, but in English, I think I can say that, so please listen.
I want to say something to the members in the brass band and the teacher. We had so many troubles and quarrels this year. I always complained about things. But when I think about the memory of the brass band, I just remember our sounds. The music we played together, the sounds of us. I will never forget the soul-stirring sound we played in the last concert. I was so happy that I played music with you. So, let me tell you. Thank you very much.

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